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July 11th, 2007, 04:01 PM
#1
Senior Hostboard Member
Included the pic of Robin, but not Jenet, since Jenet is just in that zip file thing. Nothing much to say, as I have to run and figured I'd post this before I do. I'm rather happy with how it came out, enjoy everyone.
Bonne Jenet?s defeat at the hands of Blue Mary was one of the most humiliating and one-sided thrashings anyone had ever seen. After weeks in the hospital recovering and getting new implants and cosmetic surgery to repair the damage done to her beautiful body by the brutal Mary, B. Jenet packed up her bags and hauled her gorgeous body back to her pirate ship and resumed her life at see. Unfortunately for Jenet, her crew had been watching the televised fight.
Much of the crew was embarrassed by her poor show, but most dare not call her out on it. Most is not all. Nico Robin was one of the most beautiful women on the ship with flawless tanned skin, a gorgeous face, luscious long legs, and a pair F cup jugs that where as big as the captains but, as she so constantly reminded everyone, completely real, unlike Jenet?s ?sorry sacks of crap.? It came as little surprise to anyone, Jenet included, when shortly after her return Nico challenged her to a fight for captaincy. Jenet had no choice but to accept ? the pirate code was clear, not that her pride would have let her refuse either. It was time to put the stupid slut in her place.
The rest of the crew mostly gathered around the deck while the two women cautiously circled each other. Both were clad in their usual outfits, Jenet?s skimpy slit dress and Robin?s low-cut one-piece dress that ended so high below her crotch that she would probably get arrested for indecent exposure (among other things) if she ever showed up in public and thigh-high boots. The rest of the crew eagerly watched, waiting for the first move. They did not have to wait long as Robin lunged with a punch aimed directly at Jenet?s once-more-gorgeous face (even Nico Robin had to admit that the surgeons did an amazing job. She looked just as sexy as ever!) but, unfortunately for Robin Jenet easily ducked under the punch and grabbed Nico?s arm and used the momentum to throw her over her. Robin landed hard on her back, spread eagle (getting a nice reaction from the mostly male crew) but was quick to get back on her feet.
If looks could kill, Jenet would already have been dead. Fortunately, it would take a little more than nasty looks from Nico to make the gorgeous blonde push up daisies. The flawlessly gorgeous Robin closed the distance (her bouncing breasts getting quite a reaction) and drove a hard fist into Jenet?s gut causing the blonde bombshell to double over coughing. Not one to pass up a prime opportunity, Nico grabbed the back of Jenet?s head and drove the doubled-over beauty?s face into her knee four times before shoving her onto her back, revealing a large shiner around her left eye. ?Not so tough now, eh bitch? I?ll make what Mary did seem tame.?
Screaming bloody murder Jenet leaped up and tackled her tan foe onto the ground, pinning her arms down. Jenet must have underestimated the strength in her foe?s gorgeous legs as she seemed rather surprised when Nico used said legs to kick Jenet off of her and onto her back. She casually walked over to where Jenet lay splayed on the wooden deck and sensuously bent over (giving the crew a nice view up her skirt) and raised Jenet up by her hair. The blonde still had more fight in her than Robin had bargained for, however, and surprised the gorgeous woman with a powerful uppercut to the chin that snapped Nico?s head back (and also sent a tooth flying) and caused her to stumble backwards with her hands over her face yelling muffled obscenities.
Nico threw herself at her captain and slammed her hard into the door that led below deck. She got in three hard slaps to Jenet?s pretty face before Jenet surprised her foe by opening the door and causing both girls to tumble down the stairs and land in a heap in the hallway that connected to most of the ships rooms. Jenet got up first and raised her foe up by the hair and drove two hard fists into her face that left her with a shiner just like Jenet?s and knocked a few more teeth loose. Nico, although hurt by the shots to her once flawless face, was quick to react and latched both of her hands around Bonne Jenet?s newly rebuilt fake tits in a crushing vice grip.
Jenet had enough of that in her last fight, and knew what to do this time, however. A sharp knee between Nico?s unsuspecting legs caught her hard in the groin causing her to immediately release her opponent while her eyes bulged and her mouth formed into a sensual pained ?O?. Pleased with the results, Jenet repeated the move five times causing her foe?s legs to turn to jelly and requiring Jenet to hold her up by the hair. Noticing what the room closest to them was, Jenet kicked the door open and dragged the pained Nico into the ship?s bathroom.
Jenet smiled at the irony of what she saw before her. She could not count the times she would have to yell at the crew for being sloppy pigs that forgot to flush the toilet and left disgusting messes. Pirates, after all, were not all gorgeous babes like Jenet and Robin. Most were rather brutish. For the first time, however, Jenet found herself ecstatic to find that whatever cretin last used the toilet had both neglected to clean up, and also apparently had eaten something nasty because whatever it was that was in the toilet did not look like the kind of thing that good food, or even regular bad food, would leave behind. Nico?s eyes widened in horror when she realized where she was and what Jenet was planning.
With casual sadism, Jenet grabbed ahold of Nico?s hair (causing the girl to remove her hands from her groin and feebly try and pull Jenet?s hands away) and shoved her pretty foe?s face into the disgusting mess of fluids within the toilet bowl. Nico closed her eyes and held her breath trying not to get any of the awful shit (no pun intended) in her mouth or eyes, while also flailing around in a feeble attempt to break free. After a few seconds Jenet reached back and slammed a fist down hard into the middle of Robin?s back causing her to open her mouth to scream and, in doing so, let in a deluge of filth. Jenet let go and robin pushed herself out of the toilet with great force, landing hard on her back, her hair and face soaked in filth. She got onto her hands and knees, coughing wildly from the vile things she had inhaled and it did not take long before she added to mess and vomited, most of it landing on the floor but some dribbling down her chin and staining her skimpy dress.
Jenet grabbed her heaving foe by the hair and stood her up. ?My my, you?ve made quite a mess of yourself. And your clothes! Why don?t we take them off before you ruin them even more, hm?? she said as she unzipped Nico?s outfit and exposed most of the gorgeous woman?s tan F cup breasts. Nico was completely out of it, swaying and drooling/dribbling vomit from her gaping mouth while wearing nothing but her skimpy black thong and thigh-highs. Jenet brought her back into reality with a massive punch to the face that sent teeth flying out and Nico flying also ? straight out of the bathroom and through the door across the hall that led into the kitchen.
Jenet waltzed in. She had been banged up a little, her body showed the signs of the struggle, but she was good. Nico, on the other hand, was a mess. She was missing about half a dozen teeth, had a large black eye and her soaked hair and face were dripping in a liquid so vile that Jenet was still having a hard time believing was at one point food made for human consumption. The fight was basically over, and now it was Jenet?s job to make sure she made an example of Nico to anyone else who would dare challenge her authority.
She stripped Nico of what little remained of her clothes and stood her up. She then cornered Nico into a wall and began to go to work on her tits, pounding them left and right with punch after punch. Finally, after several minutes of torture causing the sweating beauty to shriek and groan in agony, Jenet relented. Nico?s F cups seemed to have swollen to about a GG or so and looked ready to pop. One could imagine Jenet?s surprise when a hard right to the left tit did just that and sent a stream of silicone bursting forth from Nico?s nipple. ?Holy. Shit. They are fake after all!? Jenet laughed to herself as the tit slowly lost it?s shape as more and more silicone emptied itself from the implant and then the breast via the nipple. She decided it would save money on future repairs (She did not want to kill Nico, after all the girl had her uses, but examples had to be made) and be somewhat more humiliating if she left her hilariously lopsided. The once gorgeous Nico stood there drooling and delirious with pain, her sweat soaked body heaving while she panted and her GG and B cup breasts with it.
Jenet turned on the stove and let it run for a bit while she then walked back to Nico and slammed her face into the wall a few times, leaving a bloodstain on the wall and a pile of teeth on the floor. When she was done Nico?s nose was smashed flat, her left eye (already hurt from before) had swollen shut while the other one bulged grotesquely, and her lips had ballooned grotesquely. Her teeth were about 3 in number, maybe 4 or 5. All that was left was the final touch. Jenet lifted the punchdrunk Nico up and placed her ass on the stovetop for just a second, essentially branding her right buttcheek with the imprint of the stovehead. She then threw Nico on the ground and let her lie there while she went above deck to inform the male crew (and any female members) that she had left them a present in the kitchen.
And to clean up the god damned bathroom.
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July 11th, 2007, 05:56 PM
#2
HB Forum Owner
YAY, GREAT STORY!!!
MikeJV
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July 11th, 2007, 08:33 PM
#3
Senior Hostboard Member
So... madly in love with Robin.
Looks like i have another story idea now...
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July 11th, 2007, 10:15 PM
#4
Senior Hostboard Member
Glad everyone likes it. I was pleasently surprised with how this one came out. A bit longer than usual, too, I think.
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July 12th, 2007, 03:04 PM
#5
Inactive Member
Hot sexy action from start to finish! you got da skills man! [img]graemlins/devil.gif[/img]
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July 15th, 2007, 04:31 PM
#6
Senior Hostboard Member
A great story ... liking it as much as the one involving Helena. And the possibility to a rematch is there: can't wait to see Nico's other tit getting busted too. And these days as the ship's whore won't be funny for her!
The length of the story, the fight being open at the beginning, Bonne Jenet not looking like a winner at the start ... then showing clearly who's the captain and not only beating, but also humiliating poor Nico: perfect!
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July 15th, 2007, 05:35 PM
#7
Senior Hostboard Member
Thanks so much everyone! And yes, the possibility of a rematch is definately there. And, besides that, I can always play into the primordial conflict between pirates and ninjas for any potential sequal. [img]cool.gif[/img]
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